| Stylistic & Rhetorical Aspects of Writing Topic Idea Development | |||||||||||||
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | ||||||||
| Little topic | Limited topic | Moderate topic | Well developed with | Fully developed with | Topic and details | ||||||||
| development an /or | development, focus | development, focus | control and relevant | strong details | richly developed | ||||||||
| organization, few | and/or details | and details | details | Sustained voice and/ | Distinctive voice, | ||||||||
| details | Evidence of voice | Some voice | Consistent voice | or tone with | tone, and style | ||||||||
| Possible evidence of | Limited variety in | Some variety in | Variety in language | emerging style | Rich use of language | ||||||||
| voice | language used | language used | used (wording and | Effective use of | |||||||||
| Simplistic language | (wording and | (wording and | sentence structure) | language | |||||||||
| (wording and | sentence structure) | sentence structure) | |||||||||||
| sentence structure) | |||||||||||||
| Topic Development | Organization | Details | Language/Style | ||||||||||
| The degree to which the response | The degree to which manipulation of | ||||||||||||
| The overall effect of the essay | The degree to which the response is | includes examples that develop the | language including vocabulary, word | ||||||||||
| Focused | main points | choice, word combination, and | |||||||||||
| Clearly and logically ordered | sentence variety, is effective | ||||||||||||
| Clairfied by paragraphs | |||||||||||||
| Standard English Conventions | |||||||||||||
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | ||||||||||
| Errors seriously interfere with | Errors interfere somewhat with | Errors do not interfere with | Control of a variety of sentence | ||||||||||
| communication and/or | communication and/or | communication and/or | structures, grammar usage | ||||||||||
| Little control of sentence structure, | Few or no errors in simplistic or | Few errors relative to length of | and mechanics | ||||||||||
| grammar and usage , and | limited text in first-draft writing | essay or complexity of sentence | Length and complexity of essay | ||||||||||
| mechanics in first-draft writing | structure, grammar and usage and | provide opportunity for student to | |||||||||||
| mechanics in first-draft writing | show control of Standard English | ||||||||||||
| conventions on first-draft writing | |||||||||||||
| Sentences | Grammar and Usage | Mechanics | |||||||||||
| The degree to which the response includes | The degree to which the response demonstrates | The degree to which the response demonstrates | |||||||||||
| sentences that are correct in structure | correct | correct | |||||||||||
| Use of standard grammatical rules of English | Punctuation | ||||||||||||
| Word usage and vocabulary | Capitalization | ||||||||||||
| Spelling | |||||||||||||